tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7537798.post2773070551345122200..comments2023-09-16T07:08:07.941-05:00Comments on Wunderfool Press: Chapel Noir ***Brad Whittingtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13972236904131338486noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7537798.post-22121148590333788532012-05-29T20:15:01.586-05:002012-05-29T20:15:01.586-05:00That was my favorite sentence.That was my favorite sentence.Brad Whittingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13972236904131338486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7537798.post-40409563045077940722012-05-25T02:06:18.794-05:002012-05-25T02:06:18.794-05:00Sounds interesting, though I would've dropped ...Sounds interesting, though I would've dropped the last sentence in her descriptive paragraph. Less is more and what Douglas provided was more than adequate. Plus, "moved like roaches in the suet pudding" was overwriting.Mark Spyrisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13682615640207326861noreply@blogger.com