tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7537798.post2421700543218227571..comments2023-09-16T07:08:07.941-05:00Comments on Wunderfool Press: Uncle Rex Gets the NewsBrad Whittingtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13972236904131338486noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7537798.post-10753466542192963622013-04-16T19:39:17.245-05:002013-04-16T19:39:17.245-05:00Pro of putting it in: Reader gets a better insight...Pro of putting it in: Reader gets a better insight into Rex's motivation and understands Chapter 2 more as it happens.<br /><br />Pro of leaving it out: Greater tension of the slow reveal of Rex's motivation.Brad Whittingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13972236904131338486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7537798.post-91180516984664411342013-04-16T11:05:45.657-05:002013-04-16T11:05:45.657-05:00"Uncle Rex Gets the News"
I think the s..."Uncle Rex Gets the News"<br /><br />I think the story should have started with Rex watching the doctors lips as they formed the death words over Rex's life. Then looking away from the doctor's face to ponder the death sentence while noticing the details of the doctors valise.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7537798.post-3400480196032260142013-04-10T08:31:31.934-05:002013-04-10T08:31:31.934-05:00**~khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05645127878244904915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7537798.post-43119600285996747512013-04-10T08:30:11.337-05:002013-04-10T08:30:11.337-05:00Good call on making the cut. Good call on making the cut. ~khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05645127878244904915noreply@blogger.com